Savory's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Abwout Wiggin Wime]

mmmm

I like the way the shape of the upper lip area flows into the mouth shape, and the nose lines flow out to the cheeks. You should try making almost every line curve and flow into each other, it makes pictures really interesting.

[Be my Valentine!]

Too cute

I could nitpick the lumpiness of everything, but it feels too intentional and cohesive. Feels like a childrens book illustration.

[Bunny!]

Blargh

eh I actually kinda like it, except for the background. Is that a smudge or smear tool? I would use that very sparingly. Have you ever checked this guy's tutorials out?

http://www.itchstudios.com/psg/art_tut.htm

It helped me out quite a bit, although all you really need is time and practice.

SourCherryJack responds:

No I would never ever use a smear/smudge tool, ever. Its some random ass light paint brush thing I use for shading most of the time.

[Friday Flood]

Yesss

Glad you didn't take the lame way out and just paste the rabbit in somewhere. The picture reminds me of Little House on the Prairie, librarians, and goth kids. The arms are kinda short, which is something that always bugs me, but other than that I like it.

SirCannabisClock responds:

Lol goth? You butthole.

Arms critique dully noted, though I still can't see a blatant problem with their actual length. I think the true problem is the overall shape of the right forearm past the elbow and the shading.

[My Mexican Princess]

Yeeessss

Disney needs more Latinas in general. Might want to watch the polio on those arms though, and leg length... unless she's kneeling, in which case they'd be kinda long.

[Cheru Scout]

Naaah

Red team is the correct choice

[Friday Flood]

lolol

I was thinking of doing this, but it looks like I don't think mine would've been quite as cool

Jobertson responds:

If anything i think yours would be cooler..
I love what you did with your entry anyway :3
thanks for commenting

[Vocaloid]

Hot

and awesome

Chickenlump responds:

Cold and creamy.

[videotape]

my mom can do that

she can

sucho responds:

she's got one lucky son

[WHAT AM I DOING]

I call it...

Alien with a scarf

Also, running is awesome! How else would I go places unnecessarily fast?

sucho responds:

rocket car