Savory's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fat demon]

daaaw

poor demon had a rough day. I want to tell him everything is going to be okay if he just keeps a positive attitude.

[Wireless Moonwalker (texture)]

Mmmmm

Clean and classy. I'm liking this one.

OzynO responds:

Umm I'm Liking you!, but not in a weird way..>.> Ill just go back to playing super metroid then..

[Kermitten]

ahhhh

my brain! There's less of it now :(

Nicol3 responds:

You can borrow some of mine if you want.

Lotsa leftovers

[Bunbun]

classy

yup

J-qb responds:

yup

[Bunny!!]

raaaaahh

I love this bunny. I want that text to bend a little though. Indicate some slight curvature of the chest.

[Momma was an Opium Smoker]

cool

she's hot

[The Rabbit and the Heart]

Weird

it does kinda feel like those high class modernism paintings... but I don't really like those guys. Does have a strange appeal to it though. You should definitely spend some quality time on it though. Spend 2-3 hours just choosing color palettes and see what happens. Hopefully something good since color palette is very important to pixel art.

EventHorizon responds:

ok, I understand, thanks for the review!

[Friday Flood #5]

mmmm

soo good. I love everything but the friday flood logo just stamped on in the corner :(

Also what's that jizz stuff up on the right?

TurkeyOnAStick responds:

Yeah, sorry bout the logo.
Jizz stuff up on the right was an experiment, I wanted to see if Apophysis fractals would help with the whizzy lines. They don't.

[I didnt finish in time]

Some

of the gradients work out well, but the white ones around his head and on the left are a bit harsh and too computer generatedy... I think you're trying to emulate a spray paint effect? Some subtle texture, or implication that it's paint would be some nice steps away from what it is now.

The line work is pretty classy tho

Ashman responds:

funny you say about the linework since i fucked it up so many times during the process of it, good to see the salvage job is unnoticeable

[Flooding]

I want...

A slightly jagged lined background, I think it would fit the overall theme better. Feels too clean and uniform in comparison to the way everything else is drawn.

Luxembourg responds:

If you're comparing it to all the other flood pics, I couldn't have made it to fit with everything else because I was the first person in the forum to finish a piece for the flood. I do like the idea of a jagged background, though, and that would actually fit the word bubble above the rabbit as well.
Thanks for dropping a review, Savory.